Awesome comic. Keep it up. :D
I have no idea what's going on but I love it at the same time, lol
Pretty enjoyable comic! In that odd Hero-mode, the Modslinger kinda looks like Ryan North :p
Totally rad. Oh the internet: with cops as useless as the people are violent.
Only thing is I think the bottom two panels on this page are reversed, since he's returned to human form in the upper right one, but is still a bird in the bottom left one (which is the panel order the page is flowing in, visually).
Ahh, you are right! Due to how the comic is constructed it would be nearly impossible to fix that without major redrawing. I had not considered this at the outline stage. :/ I'll put in an arrow or something….. Thank you!
I'm loving it so far. We need a little more dialogue, as this looks to be rather character-driven, but otherwise, it's great.
Thank you! I'll make sure to get more dialog once this sequence is over in a few pages.
So is the "Kid, hit it with your guitar!" supposed to come before "Yeah, the power of music!"? Because that sure seems confusing to me. Unless he's the kind of guy who likes to tell people to do what they're already doing, in an effort to convince people that he's calling the shots or giving good advice. ;-)
No, What happened is he threw the guitar in front of himself, and mistakenly assumed the power of music had saved him… or something. He doesn't swing his guitar at it until the next page. The two panels at the bottom are confusing though, due to the right one being higher. It's supposed to read from left to right though.
Thanks for the comment! I will look into making it less confusing.
The art in the entire comic is amazing. I'm not sure I understand the plot but for me right now that doesn't matter so much. Keep it up!
i love tinker's face in that second to last panel. :D
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